Eigene Songs nach der Trennung schreiben

Ich als Laientexter😆 habe nach der Trennung ein paar Lieder geschrieben.

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Gute Zeiten die voller Liebe waren
Schlechte Zeiten in denen ich am Boden war.
Schlechte Zeiten, ich hätte Deine Hand gebraucht.
Schlechte Zeiten durch Dein Schweigen
Lachen und Weinen, Lachen und Weinen
Lasse die Strahlen der Liebe wieder scheinen
Lasse die Strahlen der Liebe wieder scheinen
Sag mir bitte, dass die Liebe echt war und erklär mir den Schmerz.

Sag mir bitte, dass die Liebe echt war und erklär mir den Schmerz

Forget

I wanna forget you, I wanna forget
all the great times that we had
I wanna forget you, I wanna forget
all the love that you let
me receive and feel
I wanna forget

Guess you were right
when you told me, you`d love me more
Guess I was right
when I told you I love the most
Guess you were right
when you told me your heart`s bigger
Guess I was right
when I told you I don`t think so

And now I`m gonna forget you because I have to
`cause I won`t let you hold me down
Oh, now that you`re gone, you`ve got to go
you`ve got to go out of my mind

I leave you behind,
because you left me
because I let you go
because… well, I know…

I wanna forget you, I wanna forget
the first time that we met
I wanna forget you, I wanna forget
all the dreams that we had
and never came true
I wanna forget

Guess you were right
when you told me, you`d got no chance here
Guess I was right
when I told you to try harder
Guess you were right
when you deceided to leave the country
Guess I was right
when I decided to say farewell

And now I`m gonna forget you because I have to
`cause I won`t let you hold me down
Oh, now that you`re gone, you`ve got to go
you`ve got to go out of my mind

I leave you behind,
because you left me
because I let you go
because… well, I know…

And I know your pain, I share it
It`s the last we have in common
I saw your pain when I said
I just wanna forget…
It`s our pain, darling,
about our love, my dear
It`s our pain, my love, our pain about the end of us.

Zitat von Arev87:

ICH BIN DAS ZIEL!

Ja.

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Melodie in jeder Zeile.

Zitat von Arev87:

ich bin nicht dein Echo
ich bin der Sturm

Ich liebe es.

@Till-Sander
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